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 Here's a little Fic I wrote, hope you will sing it note for note

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PostSubject: Here's a little Fic I wrote, hope you will sing it note for note   Mon Jan 24, 2011 7:31 am

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PostSubject: Re: Here's a little Fic I wrote, hope you will sing it note for note   Mon Jan 24, 2011 4:05 pm

i didnt like it that much
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PostSubject: Re: Here's a little Fic I wrote, hope you will sing it note for note   Mon Jan 24, 2011 5:47 pm

Yeah, if anything, it needs a LOT of fine tuning and/or a complete rewrite.
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PostSubject: Re: Here's a little Fic I wrote, hope you will sing it note for note   Mon Jan 24, 2011 6:36 pm

it was meh, but I don't know why you didn't base the person off yourself or why you chose a chic as main character XD
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PostSubject: Re: Here's a little Fic I wrote, hope you will sing it note for note   Tue Jan 25, 2011 1:50 pm

I am the gym leader. And I made the main character a girl because I kind of wrote it for her :P

It didn't work, she never went out with me D:

But I don't care anymore. So maybe I'll post the other one I have where I *was* the main character.
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PostSubject: Re: Here's a little Fic I wrote, hope you will sing it note for note   Tue Jan 25, 2011 3:09 pm

nope


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PostSubject: Re: Here's a little Fic I wrote, hope you will sing it note for note   Tue Jan 25, 2011 9:07 pm

i dont feel like reading any more of that, the first part wasnt good enough
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PostSubject: Re: Here's a little Fic I wrote, hope you will sing it note for note   Tue Jan 25, 2011 9:10 pm

I will tell you it actually has action. Instead of the bullshit of the first part.
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PostSubject: Re: Here's a little Fic I wrote, hope you will sing it note for note   Tue Jan 25, 2011 9:14 pm

burntnorris wrote:
I am the gym leader. And I made the main character a girl because I kind of wrote it for her :P

It didn't work, she never went out with me D:

But I don't care anymore. So maybe I'll post the other one I have where I *was* the main character.

this hurts, I apologize.
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