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Burntnorris THIS IS SPARTA!!!!
Posts : 398 Points : 6252 Street Rep : 0 Join date : 2010-07-17 Age : 31 Location : KY
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| Subject: Here's a little Fic I wrote, hope you will sing it note for note Mon Jan 24, 2011 7:31 am | |
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primeAlternative THIS IS SPARTA!!!!
Posts : 333 Points : 5996 Street Rep : 0 Join date : 2010-07-21 Age : 28 Location : stillwater, OK
Character HP: (69/69) HP: (69/69)
| Subject: Re: Here's a little Fic I wrote, hope you will sing it note for note Mon Jan 24, 2011 4:05 pm | |
| i didnt like it that much | |
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Burntnorris THIS IS SPARTA!!!!
Posts : 398 Points : 6252 Street Rep : 0 Join date : 2010-07-17 Age : 31 Location : KY
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| Subject: Re: Here's a little Fic I wrote, hope you will sing it note for note Mon Jan 24, 2011 5:47 pm | |
| Yeah, if anything, it needs a LOT of fine tuning and/or a complete rewrite. | |
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TheCelticKing you deserve a trophy
Posts : 228 Points : 6217 Street Rep : 0 Join date : 2010-07-31 Location : California
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| Subject: Re: Here's a little Fic I wrote, hope you will sing it note for note Mon Jan 24, 2011 6:36 pm | |
| it was meh, but I don't know why you didn't base the person off yourself or why you chose a chic as main character XD | |
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Burntnorris THIS IS SPARTA!!!!
Posts : 398 Points : 6252 Street Rep : 0 Join date : 2010-07-17 Age : 31 Location : KY
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| Subject: Re: Here's a little Fic I wrote, hope you will sing it note for note Tue Jan 25, 2011 1:50 pm | |
| I am the gym leader. And I made the main character a girl because I kind of wrote it for her :P
It didn't work, she never went out with me D:
But I don't care anymore. So maybe I'll post the other one I have where I *was* the main character. | |
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Burntnorris THIS IS SPARTA!!!!
Posts : 398 Points : 6252 Street Rep : 0 Join date : 2010-07-17 Age : 31 Location : KY
Character HP: (69/69) HP: (69/69)
| Subject: Re: Here's a little Fic I wrote, hope you will sing it note for note Tue Jan 25, 2011 3:09 pm | |
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primeAlternative THIS IS SPARTA!!!!
Posts : 333 Points : 5996 Street Rep : 0 Join date : 2010-07-21 Age : 28 Location : stillwater, OK
Character HP: (69/69) HP: (69/69)
| Subject: Re: Here's a little Fic I wrote, hope you will sing it note for note Tue Jan 25, 2011 9:07 pm | |
| i dont feel like reading any more of that, the first part wasnt good enough
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Burntnorris THIS IS SPARTA!!!!
Posts : 398 Points : 6252 Street Rep : 0 Join date : 2010-07-17 Age : 31 Location : KY
Character HP: (69/69) HP: (69/69)
| Subject: Re: Here's a little Fic I wrote, hope you will sing it note for note Tue Jan 25, 2011 9:10 pm | |
| I will tell you it actually has action. Instead of the bullshit of the first part. | |
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TheCelticKing you deserve a trophy
Posts : 228 Points : 6217 Street Rep : 0 Join date : 2010-07-31 Location : California
Character HP: (69/69) HP: (69/69)
| Subject: Re: Here's a little Fic I wrote, hope you will sing it note for note Tue Jan 25, 2011 9:14 pm | |
| - burntnorris wrote:
- I am the gym leader. And I made the main character a girl because I kind of wrote it for her :P
It didn't work, she never went out with me D:
But I don't care anymore. So maybe I'll post the other one I have where I *was* the main character. this hurts, I apologize. | |
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